Feedback

Sians feedback is vocalised on the feedback link  on the left of the page. 

Rhys felt that my first draft had majorly improved but felt some more context needed to be included about the father and that more internal conflict had to be added.

Charlie- Dawn saw my script in its earlier stages. She felt that the beginning was strong and especially liked the second scene. She said she was excited to read the ending once I had written it.